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An old oc returns by Danathekitsune

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The background is interesting, but why is the character himself of such lesser quality? In truth, it looks like you merely took a pair of stock photos, grafted them together, and slapped your whatever this may be between them, really. I'm curious as to the character's story, but the piece itself has thrown me for a loop. Some sections that could use improvement include the face, arms, and torso. Why does the character lack a mouth or nose? Is this an integral part of the character's story? Why does he have a lopsided crown? I'm only assuming it's a he, because you aren't leaving me with many context clues. The arms are lopsided, and the visible hand is undersized. Why is the lapel of his shirt made of four different shaped sections? One armpit is higher than the other, the same goes for the shoulders. Please explain, if you get around to it.
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:icondanathekitsune:
Danathekitsune Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
well, there's really only one explaination for all your questions; i just suck at art.

i didn't draw a nose and a mouth because it looks better this way, the crown is lopsided because i'm not very good at using the program i used to make this. i know the arms a lopsided but that's just the style i draw in. and i know about the armpits and shoulders, i only put it up here because i am proud of this
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:iconstephenfauster:
StephenFauster Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Are you proud or ashamed? The transition of your tone from begining to end has a shift.
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:icondanathekitsune:
Danathekitsune Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i'm a bit of both actually ^^;
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:iconstephenfauster:
StephenFauster Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Makes sense. I wasn't really trying to be rude, actually.
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:icondanathekitsune:
Danathekitsune Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
that's ok :)
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:iconstephenfauster:
StephenFauster Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Just trying to give you some tips. I'm proud that there are still people who don't use bases.
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:icondanathekitsune:
Danathekitsune Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
bases are stupid in my opinion
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:iconstephenfauster:
StephenFauster Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I've always found it funny and saddening to see people use bases and whine about the setting or whatnot not being accurate enough.
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